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Mr Iceman
05-14-2007, 11:23 PM
Thought I'd put these together in 1 thread.

thoughts of a dissilusioned soldier

too much blood, flowing like rivers, another shot fired, another innocence lost,
so much crying, for to much dieing, people filled with hate for fellow countryman, another child dies because a government lies, people shouting names, but no one replies, brother, sisters, husbands, wives, innocent people losing lives. Bleeding, pleading, crying, dieing. The truth is suppressed by political unrest. When will it finish, when will it end, the heartache of loss never will mend...







Alone (unfinished)

The days and nights are ever so long
What have I done,what did I do wrong
The radio plays, another love song
each hour that passes, feels a full day long

So alone I sit, Head hung low
No friends to see, No place to go
So alone I sit ,with head hung low

No loving arms for me waiting to be wrapped arround
no warm embrace ever to be found
just cold empty spaces, not a sound
a sea of silence for me to be drowned

So Alone I sit, Head hung low
No friends to see, No place to go
So alone I sit,with head hung low



AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA i can only find two of them . i will search my pc files for the rest then post um.

Peace-Phoenix
05-16-2007, 05:30 PM
I love the feeling you've put into these, they seem very genuine :)